9/08/2009 Reflections

We have to review other peers or classmates rhetorical essay in class on the day. Before class, we were just suppose to go inside the DK handbook and pick out something to make our essay better. I learned some important things in the handbook and I used some of them into my essay. Also while searching or scheming through the DK handbook, I also found a lot of sentence structures to impress the readings of my essay. The peer review was great and I can grantee that my essay is going to be better than it was before. While working with my peer or classmate, she enlighten me to add more detail about my picture into my essay. She told me that my argument was okay but may want to a few more things to support my argument. Class was great and my rhetorical analysis is still in progress.